charyoshi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doodle]

decent enough i guess

the music kept me interested in it long enough to watch it all the way through. honestly it wasnt that good and i might be able to do better than that myself. screwing around with flash is good, but unless it is truly a piece of quality, keep it on your own computer. however, i did vote to keep this movie alive because i liked the notebook paper/doodles coming to life concept. also, the movie loops. and when it loops it replays the music over itself. you might wanna get that fixed. other than that no problems and try harder the next time.

[Billy's Injured]

do you really want t3h f1v3n!?

i like your movies i really do. the high pitched voices, and simple yet funny drawn people in these little humorous situations are great, but silly only goes so far. I would say the best way for people to vote 5 on one of your movies is if you took several of these little skits and strung them all together. instead of several short movies do several short scenes which make up a longer movie. youve got a pretty good sense of humor, and the voices are good, but theyre just too short. i also like the ending with the fast accordion. keep up the good work and make em longer!

[Wizards]

decent animation, but it needed sound

i liked the classic wily coyote/ road runner theme, and the overall animation was really good, but it needed sound! with sound i would have given this a 4 instead of a 2. if you could go back, re-make it with sound, stick in a preloader, didnt make it loop, and resubmit it, it would be about 5 times better than it is now. keep up the good work!

[Sheeshkick Deux]

trippy

that was fairly well animated, but it was too short. id also like to know the story with this flash if there is one coz that was really weird and im not sure if im getting the whole picture here. decent flash for when you were still learning though. keep makin them movies and keep impoving too.

Awedball responds:

This movie is about a fat guy that needs food.
To bad for him his crippled dog has dropped a fresh turd at the top of the stairs.
He follows his wish for a tasty treat, doesnt see the shiite until its to late.
He falls down the steps and being a huge fat guy, he gets stuck in the stairway at the bottom.
His big fat head rips right off (fat transfers momentum well)and frees the skinny guy trapped inside the crusty, smelly, fat body.
Thats about all I got.
The mouse didnt exist until about two hours before I posted,
the chicken leg I did yesterday.

[DPWF 3 - My Part!]

my, what a splendid little series

until just now, i had no idea that this dainty little collection of collabs existed. Your graphics are amazing and the music went along with the movie perfectly. My only complaint is that it was a tad short, and the only other way i can see to make it better is to add sound effects. excellent work. also, would i be correct in assuming that there will be a part 4? i certainly hope so! peace out

[Pokemon Encounters!]

well that was fun wasnt it?

either "throw a pokeball", and nothing happens, or "get pissed" at the fact that the get pissed button dosent do anything. try it again man.

aleo95 responds:

there was a minor problem in the loop video section and i uploaded the fixed version all buttons now work

maybe now u could re-review?

[Birdcharmer]

What a trip!

That was a very well done and a very strange flash at the same time. The FBF guy was cool looking when compared to the smoother movements of the various birds and the background, and he sounded very weird when he talked. I would really appreciate any kind of story or background that you could give me about this flash, cus even though that was really good, i still get the feeling that im missing something rather important. This movie is the kind of movie that you watch when your totally stoned and have nothing else better to do. good job, and very unique style. cant wait to see what you do next!

[DBZ Showdown]

Better than i thought it would be

I wasnt sure what to expect when i saw the title, because people all too often make really crappy flashes on very popular shows/games/etc. However, this is better than many of them. The sprites were nicely and smoothly tweened and animated for the most part, and i liked the powerpole moves. Yet the true beauty in this flash lies in its sound, and the fact that you have sound effects for every punch, kick, blast, and landing. that in itself makes this flash monumentally better than it would have been otherwise. As for improvement, i would say find some more attacks, because even though you spaced them out and combined them to make different attacks (such as when goku did the helicopter leading to the blast), the movements were still a bit repetitive. Most importantly however is your screen size. make it at least twice as big, because people like to WATCH flash movies, not SQUINT at flash movies. I think that this is very good for your first flash movie and i hope that you keep learning and improving your techniques and animations. Good Luck!

ZeroJ responds:

Yeah. You can say im trying to be perfect in the SFX. Atleast thats the last thing you can do for a good movie. And its not my first flash but my first sprite flash ^^. And its not tweened its all fbf. Except for the Helicopter and Summersault. Pce out ZeroJ

[HighSchool Never Ends]

This Flash is crunk fo shizzle!

i am to liking the song! i must admit i was skeptical at first when i saw just a bunch of black and white words and average animations, but the more the song went on, the more i liked it! i like how you encorporated the FBF mouths along with the simple graphics, it kept it loose and different enough to the healthy medium between repetitive and completely random. I also love the song still and i had never heard it before. I also think that this is extraordinary work for your second flash submitted to newgrounds, and that if you can make a music video cool just by moving the captions around on the screen and showing them in different ways, then you've got some skill! Theres also the speed factor, the fact that you made this in a week is very good. i hope that you keep working with flash and keep up the good work.

DrSeven responds:

you, my friend, are awesome.

[Super Mario bros Z ep 6 (old series)]

I....WORSHIP YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

i have only just recently gotten flash on my computer, but i have watched many flash and sprite movies so i know good from bad, and you sir are chuck norris times Jesus Christ. You are easily the greatest user of sprites in flash movies, and you instantly go to the top 10 users of flash in the universe. i know that you probably wont ever read this, and this easily goes without saying, but keep making these movies and its people like you that keep me going back to newgrounds every now and again to see whats new on the portal. I will always remember your awesomeness for the rest of my life, and if/when i make and submit a flash movie, it will be people like you that i keep in mind. Once again, excellent work and i hope that you win the lottery.

Just another nameless fan,
Charyoshi