charyoshi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The True Power of B]

pretty good but there was a little problem

from the time that strawberry went after the artist to the time the B fell there was no sound. i would suggest that you try to fix it but its pretty good either way. btw, i had no idea clock daay was today until i saw the top 50. just thought youd like to know that.

PinClock responds:

Yeah I fixed that up, and Did the layout tell you anything? just curious.

[Sheeshkick Deux]

trippy

that was fairly well animated, but it was too short. id also like to know the story with this flash if there is one coz that was really weird and im not sure if im getting the whole picture here. decent flash for when you were still learning though. keep makin them movies and keep impoving too.

Awedball responds:

This movie is about a fat guy that needs food.
To bad for him his crippled dog has dropped a fresh turd at the top of the stairs.
He follows his wish for a tasty treat, doesnt see the shiite until its to late.
He falls down the steps and being a huge fat guy, he gets stuck in the stairway at the bottom.
His big fat head rips right off (fat transfers momentum well)and frees the skinny guy trapped inside the crusty, smelly, fat body.
Thats about all I got.
The mouse didnt exist until about two hours before I posted,
the chicken leg I did yesterday.

[Pokemon Encounters!]

well that was fun wasnt it?

either "throw a pokeball", and nothing happens, or "get pissed" at the fact that the get pissed button dosent do anything. try it again man.

aleo95 responds:

there was a minor problem in the loop video section and i uploaded the fixed version all buttons now work

maybe now u could re-review?

[DBZ Showdown]

Better than i thought it would be

I wasnt sure what to expect when i saw the title, because people all too often make really crappy flashes on very popular shows/games/etc. However, this is better than many of them. The sprites were nicely and smoothly tweened and animated for the most part, and i liked the powerpole moves. Yet the true beauty in this flash lies in its sound, and the fact that you have sound effects for every punch, kick, blast, and landing. that in itself makes this flash monumentally better than it would have been otherwise. As for improvement, i would say find some more attacks, because even though you spaced them out and combined them to make different attacks (such as when goku did the helicopter leading to the blast), the movements were still a bit repetitive. Most importantly however is your screen size. make it at least twice as big, because people like to WATCH flash movies, not SQUINT at flash movies. I think that this is very good for your first flash movie and i hope that you keep learning and improving your techniques and animations. Good Luck!

ZeroJ responds:

Yeah. You can say im trying to be perfect in the SFX. Atleast thats the last thing you can do for a good movie. And its not my first flash but my first sprite flash ^^. And its not tweened its all fbf. Except for the Helicopter and Summersault. Pce out ZeroJ

[HighSchool Never Ends]

This Flash is crunk fo shizzle!

i am to liking the song! i must admit i was skeptical at first when i saw just a bunch of black and white words and average animations, but the more the song went on, the more i liked it! i like how you encorporated the FBF mouths along with the simple graphics, it kept it loose and different enough to the healthy medium between repetitive and completely random. I also love the song still and i had never heard it before. I also think that this is extraordinary work for your second flash submitted to newgrounds, and that if you can make a music video cool just by moving the captions around on the screen and showing them in different ways, then you've got some skill! Theres also the speed factor, the fact that you made this in a week is very good. i hope that you keep working with flash and keep up the good work.

DrSeven responds:

you, my friend, are awesome.

[SouthSideSchoolReloaded#1]

SOMETHING HAS GONE HORRIBLY WRONG!!!!

dood, this movie at first glance looks very promising, but something is very wrong with the sound- it starts twice and creates a loud conglomeration of jumbled random sounds that could otherwise be called words. i think that you should definately re-submit this, but in its current state i can only blam it. sorry. -_-

SwimtheSwan responds:

Something is horribly wrong with your speakers my friend. It works fine on my computer and all my friends computers.

[4 Random Videos]

guess wat

PHOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNE!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!

as to your movie, im not sure if this will pass judgement or not. its not that good, and most of it wasnt even flash. however, you did have an easter egg and the last one was kind of funny. i fived it....lets see what happens.

Homeless responds:

YAY!

[Tank Buds episode 103]

the next greatest series ive never heard of!

That was AMAZING!!!!! funny from start to finish, animation done just in a way that excentuates the most complicated graphics, and either hides or uses the bad animation for humorous purposes. There actually was a storyline so that was good, and one of the few flashes with more than 3 main characters! technically, at some parts there were violence, but not enough to be of any noteable quality. if you really wanted to up the violence quotent, show the ass lizard actually getting eaten by the cat. however, due to the sheer awesomeness of this flash, violence is no longer required. Marvelous work and please make another!

Mek1985 responds:

Thanks for the kind review, I do appriciate it. Sorry, I wasn't going for a "violent" cartoon, if I were, there would have been alot more gore. I didn't show Iggy being eaten because it's funnier to end it so abruptly and you get to wonder if he was even eaten or attacked at all. Thaaaanks, check out the first 2 if you want, alot more to come!

[brainless entertainment 3]

pffftt bwaHAHAHAHAHAHA

That was great! i was laughing from beginning to end. The hulk and the lord of the rings were priceless, and i like the dirty job too.
Snoopy as the DOG was nothing short of pure comical genius, and
also, at the beginning of the movie, what does dingoed mean?
plz make more and thank you for giving me that magical 3-4 minutes. NOBODY THROWS A DWARF!!! >:( (lol)

way 2 go dood. 900 g37 t3h t3h f1v3n!

Utterly-Moot responds:

Thank you very much man! Glad you enjoyed it, it might take a while but there will certainly be more!

[The One Hour FBF Collab 3]

i love it!

glorious flash, all made in an hour! random explosions and burning all around, and it made me smile. graphics were kewl, i love the 1 hour collab concept, there was music in the background, explosions are violent, and there was no interactivity or humor. overall, you guys kickass and i hope you make more of these.
Do you take requests? if you do could you make a tails collab? if not......could you do the tails collab anyway (tails roolz)? plz and thank u! keep up the good work!

itsjms responds:

umm... go check out our first and second. There great to thanks for the support